Is this a good chant?

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Haelstrom

Is this a good chant?

Postby Haelstrom » Mon Apr 20, 2015 1:11 am

I made it for someone who's friends are both fighting ^^

“These friends of mine are in distress
Help [friend 1] and [friend 2] fix this mess.”
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Re: Is this a good chant?

Postby Firebird » Mon Apr 20, 2015 10:30 am

Oooooo, I like it!
and I like how it leaves the solution up to the friends, and if these friends choose to go their seprate ways you would be ok with that?
Do you mind if others use it?
Bb, Firebird
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Re: Is this a good chant?

Postby Haelstrom » Mon Apr 20, 2015 5:03 pm

Yes of course you can use it ^^
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