I wrote this spell! Its not finished but what do you think?

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Purewitch22
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I wrote this spell! Its not finished but what do you think?

Postby Purewitch22 » Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:26 pm

here it is! Again I KNOW it is not finished But I need opinions! Note: It for my animal spirit guide!

My animal guide my alli, when I sleep I call you to my dreams! Reveal who you are to me! I sense your presance near me, no matter where I am! Thank you for helping me, now I wish to help you too! Please reaveal your TRUE figure to me, but allow me to remember! Seek to see my heart and soul and help me, prepare me for those which I need preparing for!
Blessed Be!
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Re: I wrote this spell! Its not finished but what do you thi

Postby spook » Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:20 pm

is there one purpose for the spell?
I would keep the wording focused more on the single intent of the spell.
it's easier to focus and send out if it's not cluttered with secondary requests.

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Re: I wrote this spell! Its not finished but what do you thi

Postby Ravencry » Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:56 pm

Yes, I agree with Spook. It seems after the first sentence, you lose the whole reason that your doing the spell. Just say something like 'Spirit guide, reveal your face to me in my dreams.'

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Re: I wrote this spell! Its not finished but what do you thi

Postby [WITCH1] » Tue Jan 25, 2011 11:40 pm

Very beautiful PureWitch, I though agree with Spook and Ravencry.... But your not finish so you can fix that I guess!
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